Dear sir/madam,

Although I am sending this to you in a PM, it is not a critique or a notice about grammar/spelling. On the contrary, I am writing to tell you how nearly perfect your fic, A White Mare is, and how much I've enjoyed it. You can think of this more as "fan mail" or something of that sort if you wish.

First, I wish to tell you about the story itself. I believe it was amazing, beyond excellent. A masterpiece, if you will, and certainly the on the top of the list of the best fanfictions I've ever read (and that's quite a lot more than I'd like to admit to), or possibly literature in general (of which I am an even more voracious reader). This work had everything I look for in good books, and even more. A White Mare is generally clean (content-wise, something I tend to appreciate when media seems to think vast amounts of profanity and sexual content make a good story rather than the actual story), deep and yet simple, relatable and yet fantastical, humorous and yet serious or even sad, and over all, totally epic. The characters are great, fleshed out, believable, and relatable. The plot makes sense and is gripping, as opposed to some Humans in Equestria or Ponies on Earth fics that lose direction because there is no conflict or anything to do; instead, you carry the ideas to their logical conclusions, a thing that many authors (myself included) are at times reluctant to do. I also like how you showed how a being like Princess Celestia appearing, even just over text, would affect the world. Despite what other commentators may say about the changes that the Princess makes are "unrealistic" or make her a "Mary Sue", I would disagree; as you made the point of, she has ruled her country (apparently a majority of her planet) for thousands of years and that her talents with politico-economics and social skills were what allowed her to rule for so long in the first place. Moreover, I absolutely loved the way you wrote her character. As opposed to other interpretations, Celestia is not a "troll", unkind, base or un-noble, nor is she "high and mighty" as it were; rather you wrote the Princess as benevolent and yet firm, both intelligent and wise, and level-headed at all times. In my opinion, she sounded exactly like she should.

In addition to the story itself, I just wanted to let you know that, even in the short about of time it took me to read it, I felt it had a deep impact on a personal level. I feel inspired, as well as a host of other emotions I feel words are inadequate to contain. Thank you for your work, and may you have many more tales to weave in the time to come.

May God bless you in all you do,

• DarknutLord

The story was just..... I dont even know if i can explain how i feel about haha! I guess ill start with saying that this is definitely one of the BEST stories ive ever read, and mind you, that is very difficult to achieve seeing as ive been reading technicolor horse stories for several years now! Anyways, this story is definitely one of my all-time favorites, on par with stories such as Exchange and the like, which is why am inclined to comment, which i hardly do! (I also saw your last authors note mentioning how you like long comments

So... Where to begin? At first, i was skeptical to read this story as it is very easy to mess up the concept of "pony on earth" and vice versa, but once i started reading i couldnt stop! The amount of depth you put into this story is incredible i think, i love how you started it all with him just finding her as a regular mare to a world-changing adventure with powers to bend and know physics almost beyond comprehension! Which brings me to another great part of this story! How you brought in so many different amazing components from macroeconomics to astrophysics is by far one of the most astounding things a story has accomplished that ive ever seen! You added so much depth and science to the story that it was mind-bending! All this crazy, mind-boggling science that i had a ridiculous time trying to even merely get a grasp of definitely added to the already incredible experience that this story provided! This is one of those very rare, ultra-special stories that make me REALLY think, you know what i mean? It made me have the equivalent of shower-thoughts, questioning existence, deep philosiphical ideas (if you can call my crazy thought trains that), and the universe itself really made this story an experience rather than a mere collection of words. It was one of those stories where i spent half my time "reading" exploring my own head cannon and previously mentioned crazy thought train. In short, it was a story that i got genuinely lost in, in a good way of course! Not to mention the incredible way you fashioned all the characters so that, like in the story, itself became much more an immersive adventure WITH the characters rather than a mere story! So that added with the great character and plot development is what definitely made this story a very memorable one and well deserved of its place in the feature box, also ensuring that this story will stay with me and i will no doubt be returning to it in the future as is custom of course for all absolutely amazingly astonishing stories!

I would just like to finish this off with a few little extra thoughts of mine. I see a lot of talk about the ending, and how it is supposedly the "lackluster" part of this story, to which i find interesting. While i guess it didnt completely fit with the rest of the story i think it definitely opens up ideas of a sequel such as maybe the events after the connection of the worlds or maybe even the protaginist's new life in Equestria, (i cant remember his name for the love of god so i apologize). But yea, i think the ending definitely opens up any number of alleys that you could explore with possoble sequels or side stories (its those crazy thought trains i swear I think that is definitely what is makes this story different as well as more interesting, how it opens different possible doors for headcannon and crazy thought train ideas, just like how Celestia left the humans on Earth, with whole new ideas and crazy possibilities, thats how i feel this story left me! So, to finish, i just wanted to say Thank You. Thank you for writing such a memorable story and taking your time to do so. I also want to apologise my probably obvious lack of sinple grammar and punctuation, as well as the excessive exclamation points which probably make me out to be a giddy schoolgirl (which in all honesty, i see as a proper reaction to this fantastic story! I apologise for these simple mistakes of laziness as im writing this on a shitty old LG phone at 7 in the morning after having not slept due to reading the experience thats this story. So, one last time (i promise), i just want to thank you for writing such a masterpiece that i will no doubt remember, and like i previously said, return to. Also thank you for the no doubt ridiculous headcannon that i will spawn because of this story. So anyways, this is me trying my besy to repay you for what you have bestowed upon me, and to finish it off, reminding YOU, to Stay Cla$$y my friend

So my uncle died two days ago, suicide. I have been an emotional mess and then I read the white mare. Thank you for making this painful experience better with this story. I hope that it will not be stand alone and will continue. However if it does remain stand alone know it had a great impact during a time 90 need.

Do not look now RandomBlank but you just made a huge splash here on the fimfiction site.

for a short story you have a huge hit on your hooves.

I am really sure I will not be the only one to tell you just how good this is or to point out the fact you left a cliffhanger at the end.

We the readers need a sequel.

Harts Fire